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Tuesday, September 27th 2005

6:59 AM

Cinquain

Love is,

like a diamond,

shiny, beautiful, big,

it shows all of your emotions,

freely.

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Posted by Robert Gray:

The comparison in this is a really good one, you need to correct buetiful to beautiful, one mistake isn't bad the poem more than makes up for it.
Wednesday, September 28th 2005 @ 11:16 AM

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